Hey! Lol I know, I love kids and their smart questions, and how they make adults squirm and wish the Earth would swallow them.
I admit I didn't know if you guys would be interested in seeing the scene about Charles pretty much fine-combing his own mental landscape. I had it rather blurry in my mind and didn't know how it would translate on paper. But you'll have another scene like that one soon, so I promise that much.
Ehh I know I took too long with this story :/ Normally I write short stories, about 15 chapters long. But well, I guess these characters are demanding *sigh*
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Date: 2011-10-09 11:08 pm (UTC)I admit I didn't know if you guys would be interested in seeing the scene about Charles pretty much fine-combing his own mental landscape. I had it rather blurry in my mind and didn't know how it would translate on paper. But you'll have another scene like that one soon, so I promise that much.
Ehh I know I took too long with this story :/ Normally I write short stories, about 15 chapters long. But well, I guess these characters are demanding *sigh*
I'm glad you're still onboard :)